melsville ([info]melsville) wrote,
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Sue the Horse

Once upon a time there was a horse named Sue. Sue had brown polka dots and her main color was black. Sue was a very good horse, she came when she was called, she never played with her food, but her parents were mean. When Sue played with her friends and her parents saw her they would make her quit. One day when Sue was out walking in the forest she found a baby rabbit. Slowly Sue walked up to the rabbit. She studied it and found out that it was dead. The bunny had been shot. Sue ran away because she didn't want to get shot to. Sue was scared enough that she didn't stop running until she was home. When she arrived her parents said to her, "Why were you in the forest? You could have gotten lost." Right before they were going to punish her she heard a little voice calling her name. Sue galloped away from her parents and toward the voice. All she found was a butterfly, but right when she looked at it it instantly it turned into a horse. That really surprised Sue!!! Then gently the horse said "I will make your parents nice, if you don't tell them about me." "Ok?" Sue never told her parents. Then one day when Sue woke up her parents were very nice so, Sue found the horse and thanked her. From then on Sue had very nice parents and a very nice friend.

THE END

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  • 4 comments

[info]thehegemonca

August 6 2005, 02:43:13 UTC 6 years ago

I'm sooooo confused

Where's Joeseph when you need him?

[info]littletexas

August 6 2005, 08:33:37 UTC 6 years ago

That was the most random, tripped-out-on-acid story I have ever heard you tell, Mel. It sounds like something I would have put together for my Creative Writing class. :)

[info]nightmorph

August 7 2005, 14:08:56 UTC 6 years ago

..and only i know the truth of this strangeness.

[info]melsville

August 7 2005, 16:18:03 UTC 6 years ago

written by me, in fourth grade, for class. probably had to have a transformation, which almost explains the butterfly-> horse event. also probably had to have a moral, so the obedient horse got a good friend and good parents. the end
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